The Misfortune of Hana Otonashi (Orgasmic Refresh Derivative Story) Pochitaro

The Misfortune of Hana Otonashi (Orgasmic Refresh Derivative Story) Pochitaro

Rating

4.76 ★★★★★

Product summary

The protagonist, Hana Otonashi (26) has for some reason ended up working at an erotic maid cafe.

The rules of this cafe are…
“When you take a customers order, make sure to guide your master’s finger to your pussy.”

As the masters who frequent our establishment are all gentlemen, they will not move their fingers of their own accord, but…

* Originally published at Comic Market 103, December 31st, 2023.

* This story has no direct relation to “Orgasmic Refresh.”
The main heroine Hana Otonashi has been used in a derivative way.

* Can be enjoyed as a standalone product or even more so in addition to the main story.

13 main monochrome pages
+ event limited novelty (cheki / bromide style cards x3)

Genre

Successive Orgasms Maid Cosplay Waitress Masturbation Squirting / Gushing Big Breasts No Pubic Hair

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Reviews

Tension conveyed by facial expressions
Hana-chan’s facial expression conveys the tension of not being able to stop even though she is not allowed to. It’s such a short story! My heart was pounding. The price is really a great deal for such a short story.
I haven’t read the massage story yet, but I can enjoy this story alone.
I really liked the chekki-style at the end!

You can never have too many ifs!
I wondered what “if” or “second creation” was, but I thought that if there is no fixed capsule, there should be any number of ones with different settings.
The heroine was cute and soft as ever.
Thank you for letting us meet Heroine-chan again!
The afterword is about XX of the story of the girl who becomes XX, and it’s a great deal, so if you bought the main book, please buy this one too!

Well-directed!
The story is mainly fluffy, and in fact, if you look at each act carefully, you will get the impression that there is surprisingly little that is extreme or overly expressive. But even so, there is an appealing charm that stirs up excitement, as if even those of us who are reading are swallowed up. I can only say that this is an amazing feat of presentation. I would like to give maximum credit to this part of the book.

The girl who climaxes against her will is cute.
This is a story about a girl who works in a naughty maid cafe. It is a place where no naughty acts are performed without the girl’s consent except for having her hand placed on her crotch, but the girl finally climaxes after being touched on her crotch repeatedly. It is very cute to see her climaxing against her will, as if she had been dammed up. After that, she seems to have sex with a customer with her body on fire, which is very fantastical.

Worth more than 220 yen.
This work is not the main story but an IF story extravaganza. The expressions the girls reach and the atmosphere of the store make me think “If I could be the master of this store, I would like to go there once. The girls are very cute.

As mentioned in the summary section, this book also comes with a cheki (wind card). This alone is worth more than 1000 yen.

I started from this book, which is an extra edition, but there is no prerequisite knowledge required, so please enjoy the “service” of the maids for only 200 yen admission fee.

If you like the sample, buy it!
I was wondering, “What is a second creation of an original work? I wondered, but the price was reasonable, so I bought it,
I was surprised to find that the price was reasonable, so I bought it and enjoyed it.
I was able to enjoy it to the level of saying “Oh, this is a hit!

The story is about a girl who somehow ends up working at an erotic maid café. It must be genius to be able to draw such a story with such a theme in such a short period of time.
The way the artist draws the girl is wonderful, and the development is so convincing that Hana-chan would be like this.
If you like girls who can’t say no, I think it will stick.
If you were interested in this book when you read the sample, you are a winner!

I’m sure that the customers are looking at the set menu and thinking, “Hurry up and do xxx! I’m sure the customers are looking at the food and thinking, “I can’t wait to see the food! I would be fidgeting.
If you read it again from Hana-chan’s point of view and from the customer’s point of view, you can enjoy it twice in one sample. The owner of this store is definitely a pervert, as he must have thought of the “finger…” rule.

It made me happy to see Hana-chan looking so happy. I want to see Hana-chan Otonashi again.
And I like that person who was written down with the postcard at the end of the book the best.
I hope we will get to know her background someday…

Thank you, Pochitaro-sensei, for your wonderful works.
I will continue to support you in the shadows and look forward to your next work.